... Reviews. Miko.—A fair sort of essay. Your sentence construction is bit faulty times The esnee is all right, but you not express it well a* you might. However, practice will help you to do so. 64. Whitethobx. Instead of adherent,” use *’ inhenat T> ianaio ...

... REVIEWS. Z»ta.—Your essay contains 100 many paragraphs. Three, at the outside, would be sufficient for such an essay. It is not true that Scotsmen lack sense of humour, but it is of a somewhat different kind from the Irishman's. Your summing up of the ...

... REVIEWS. ** Novice.”—For “it having got all it forces,” etc., say “its.” This jsa very common form mistake, “ instead going,” for “my.” You speak “either severe or hot climate.” it is not only cold countries that are severe. Your punctuation is defective ...

... REVIEWS. Eleve.”—You say, the deaf man can work at his business no matter how deaf he is.” Of course, it depends entirely on what his business is. He could not act as teacher, barrister, solicitor, doctor, and variety of other professions. The story of ...

... REVIEWS. Novelty. Previous is an adjective. Therefore you should have written Previously to 80 years ago.” It is poor sort of essay in many respects. Your data is fault, so also are your conclusions. What is the meaning of this sentence ? A journey than ...

... REVIEWS. Esperanto.—Omit “on, in this phrase, When we contemplate on.” Tution is spelling error. It is not a bad little, essay. The Climax has now been reached. Climax does not ie ...

... REVIEWS. “Janper.”—Instead “does not be” say “is not” or “is not usually.” “Disasterous” is a spelling error. On tbe whole it is well written. The more salient features are embraced, and treated interestingly .The opening sentences are too long. The second ...

... REVIEWS. Amateur. —Yon should send your name and address well nom-de-pluiue. \ou need not be so precise to say his (or her) and •'he (or she).” Confinement the masculine gender in such essay will understood to nave common reference. Your essay is very ...

... REVIEWS. Skerries.—“The great forests of England was,” etc., is ungrammatical. Filliph” is spelling error. Owing too cheaper coal,” contains the wrong word. The essay is fair. 60. Malachi.—Avoid opening your essays with a definition. Wherever education ...

... REVIEWS. Scot.—Your essay is poor, and you would, sure, stand thanco in a Second Division competition. Here is a very bad sentenc Women can fight for their countries (for country's) freedom, besides (for instead of) ascending the Public (why a capital ...

... REVIEWS. “China.” —You havo no faith in arbitration it is known to-day. I think you are right. But you might have argued the case theoretically, when am sure you would havo found much to decide your opposition to bloodshed. Essay very good. 70. Outlook ...

... Reviews. Colonist.— Yoor eu«y ia on* of the careless -ort. It is full of errors sod abaurdities. You •rite they for the,” dept for debt,” and many other mistakes in spelling are observable. Then you talk about the “golden wants of commerce’ and “true ...